In step 19. When I clicked on pitches then new, none of the contact Name/ Mobile/ Email / follow up and comments fields show up.
Sorry you're stuck but there's almost always a pretty easy fix! Do NOT try to start all over again, eg. uninstall Max's Pitch Package, etc. That can make things worse.
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